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15 April 2010

30 Words::Race

{Photo Credit: AnAlliteration on Etsy}

Droplets of water
suddenly
dot the window,

marking their territory on the glass.

I cheer the ones racing
d
o
w
n
,
d
o
w
n

picking up friends along the way.

Go, tiny raindrop! Go!
Enjoy the day!
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5 comments:

  1. Bossy BettyApril 15, 2010 at 5:13 PM

    Lovely! Thanks!

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  2. Barbara LewisApril 15, 2010 at 6:58 PM

    You're the only one I know who can make a rain drop sound like "The Little Engine Who Could!" Beautiful post!

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  3. JennersApril 15, 2010 at 8:01 PM

    Love that photo! And I love driving in a car when the rain is racing along the windows!

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  4. AlexandraApril 15, 2010 at 8:42 PM

    So sweet. We enjoyed it all.

    Thank you

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  5. Pearl and PebbleApril 15, 2010 at 9:20 PM

    That was so sweet! I could see this in a children's book. Simple, eloquent and evocative. I could almost hear the pat patty pat. (That's my raindrop sound in case you were wondering) Have you ever written a children's book?

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